The Scottish Prisoner by Diana Gabaldon, 2011
As far as I'm concerned,
Diana Gabaldon can basically do no wrong. My list of favorite
literary characters essentially begins and ends with Jamie Fraser,
and the Outlander series is as near and dear to my heart as any work
of literature I've ever experienced. I wasn't absolutely blown away
by the first novel in the Lord John spin-off series, but it was still
a great read. For a Gabaldon worshipper like me, then, The Scottish
Prisoner is a magnificent little gift, like finding an elegantly
wrapped box of chocolates in a broom closet. It's not the next Outlander
novel – that's An Echo in the Bone, which is still on my shelf
waiting to be devoured. No, Prisoner is a hybrid novel, straddling
both series, starring both Jamie and Lord John in an all-new
adventure.
It's 1760, many years after the end of the Highland Uprising, and Jamie Fraser
is still basically a prisoner of the English, working on parole as a
groom on a horse farm. Jamie's life is both complicated and enriched
by the presence of his illegitimate son, Willie, being raised as the
heir to the Dunsany title. Meanwhile, Lord John Grey comes into
possession of a packet of documents accusing a senior military officer of
corruption and treason. Lord John enlists Jamie's help in translating
a mysterious poem that hints at a full-scale Jacobite conspiracy, and
the two are soon reluctant traveling companions on a journey to the
muddy and dangerous land of Ireland, where murder, treachery, and
dark plots await them.
The Scottish Prisoner is
interesting in part because it's incredibly inessential. There's no crucial, plot-y reason for it to exist at all. It takes
place in a small gap in the Outlander timeline already covered in
Voyager, so nothing terribly important occurs, either in the story
or in the character development. It's a novel that exists simply
because Jamie and Lord John are two incredible characters, and their
fans would hungrily read a novel in which they went to the grocery
store together. Gabaldon is an absolute genius at piling layers upon
layers of development on these two men while still keeping them
consistent and recognizable. The Jamie Fraser we see in this novel
(angry, bitter, still mourning the loss of his wife) is very
different from the man we see in, say, The Fiery Cross, but that's
because the progression of these characters is so logical and so
painstakingly real. This Jamie is sad and worn down by life, but he's also not without hope, and the way Gabaldon depicts that is a master class in character.
It's the tenuous, burgeoning friendship
between Jamie and Lord John that forms the heart of Prisoner, a
friendship that's strained by their conflicting national loyalties
and polar-opposite personalities, not to mention the fact that Grey
is still in love with Jamie. It's a testament to Gabaldon's immense
skill that she's able make the relationship even work at all, let
alone make it leap off the page the way she does. The way these two
men navigate the unimaginable gulfs between them – personal,
political, cultural, sexual – and still manage to find mutual respect and
affection is incredible. I can't imagine a newcomer to the series
would understand their relationship at all; it takes knowledge of
both their shared past and their shared future to properly put
together the mosaic. It's an unbelievably rich tapestry of
storytelling that gains even more dimension when Gabaldon uses the relationship between John and Jamie to explore the turbulent connection between England and Scotland. This is what psychologically compelling historical fiction should look like, people.
The problem with The
Scottish Prisoner is that, as a hybrid novel, it's neither a slim
historical mystery like the other Lord John books nor a vast,
sweeping family saga like the other Outlander books. Prisoner doesn't
really have an easy label or a clear structure, and since it clocks
in at over five hundred pages, this leads to a somewhat sleepy,
erratic pace, full of meandering subplots and lots of beating around
the bush. And that's fine! Gabaldon has never been a writer who gets
right to the point; it's one of the things I love and adore about her
work. The side stories and little discursions are part of the fun. It does make sections of the book a slog, though, and I never
managed to work up much sustained interest in the plot.
Short-term plotting has long been a weakness for Gabaldon, as it is here; every time the mystery seems about to go in an interesting direction or a bit of tension is introduced, it's quickly undercut. There's a neat twist late in the novel, and a nifty action scene or two (Gabaldon's depiction of a critical duel is as breathless and sensate a portrayal as you'd expect), but you never get a cathartic moment of "Ah-ha!" and the central conspiracy is dealt with off-screen with a minimum of fuss. Gabaldon's portrait of the desperate, ragged Jacobites hanging all of their hopes on a crazy scheme is haunting and affecting, though, especially when Jamie sides against them with the English. It's just too bad that there isn't a little more suspense to the storytelling, and some tougher editing.
Short-term plotting has long been a weakness for Gabaldon, as it is here; every time the mystery seems about to go in an interesting direction or a bit of tension is introduced, it's quickly undercut. There's a neat twist late in the novel, and a nifty action scene or two (Gabaldon's depiction of a critical duel is as breathless and sensate a portrayal as you'd expect), but you never get a cathartic moment of "Ah-ha!" and the central conspiracy is dealt with off-screen with a minimum of fuss. Gabaldon's portrait of the desperate, ragged Jacobites hanging all of their hopes on a crazy scheme is haunting and affecting, though, especially when Jamie sides against them with the English. It's just too bad that there isn't a little more suspense to the storytelling, and some tougher editing.
None of this is really all that
much of a problem, though, since the plot is just a slender frame on
which to hang the real meat of the story, which is the two main
characters interacting against a beautifully realized historical
backdrop with some dollops of action and a spine-tingling dash of the
paranormal. Nobody does that combo better than Gabaldon, and even if The Scottish Prisoner isn't her best work, it's still a totally worthy addition to the ever-growing Outlander cycle.